You created some interesting lines here with the glass shelf on the right and the wall/window on the left. It helps frame the action of the photo. I like the interaction of the sims and the expression on her face definitely says she is agnry! I would like to point out one thing here. On the female character, I think cutting out her feet and placing her head too close to the edge of the photo seems to lessen her presence. Zooming out a little bit more to include her whole body language may have improved the emotional impact, even if just slightly. Cutting out the guy is okay as he is the secondary character. Other than that, I really like the presentation of this scene.
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